
What is it that you’re thinking? I can only try to guess..
The sound of the ocean makes it hard to focus on anything besides it, but you are an exception, cause you are my friend. I was always alone before this, a solitary adventure you could say. This is what I wanted… for you to be by my side, so I can know what you think about when you’re here.
Do you also feel cold? The sort of cold that shows you your true feelings, in the water’s shadows ? I wanted someone to share this cold…. just stay here with me.
do you feel nostalgic? Distant memories probably awoken? Does it make you cry, or do you feel like dancing amidst the waves? Tell me…. I want to know…
Free from the influence of technology, you still have the potential to see. All you need to do is try..
try and you might just see a rarity in this mundane life of ours….try and let the world be formed anew,before you.
As your eyes glisten with newfound emotions, I look at you, and I see myself. You are my reflection in a way, and now I know that I’m not alone.
Will I ever meet you again? I don’t want to lose you too….
You’re like all those people, who I can never meet again, lost opportunities, lost friends, some who left and some who I left behind…..so don’t go, if you can..
there is a red glow in the sky as the sun embraces us…so beautiful….
Light blue waves underneath the blushing sun.
The warmth reaches your face, and you smile.
You don’t want to leave…i know that feeling. But you will need to eventually. I Wish I could make the day a bit longer for you . Anyways it was good spending time with you.
Now you can return to me….me from who you have arisen…. I’ll carry you with me, wherever I go.
you’ll be my secret keeper, and if I ever need to see you again, I’ll just ask you to come home,
and we will dance amidst the waves…..together.
Tanishq, this is beyond beautiful. ❤️
An open call for people who are done with their mundane lives. I love the way how it begins – ‘What is it that you’re thinking? I can only try to guess..The sound of the ocean makes it hard to focus on anything besides it, but you are an exception, cause you are my friend.’
Wow. Just Wow. 🎈
Thank you so much Sana. You are the inspiration for this post, so I’m glad you liked it!!☺
Oh my! I’m at loss of words, truly. Thank you so much, I’m so humbled. 🙂
so very beautiful
Thanks a lot!☺
Beautiful.
Thank you ☺
Start was really Sooo good!!!✌
Wonderful post. You are a gifted writer.
Thank you so much! 😊
Thanks for liking my post.
FATE OF WOMEN – THE FOUR BROKEN MIRRORS (TALES)
I appreciate that very much. Thanks again
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You’re welcome!
You are also welcome Mr tanishq
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Fantastic and amazing writeup your got there. I like the beginning part.
I guess you did a good analysis of the poem.
You are such a phenomenal person with such incredible analysis about the poem.
Am so glad you commented on it.
I so much love this write up.
Am highly motivated this morning for such words and encouragement on your blog.
I hope you have a wonderful and relaxing day Mr tanishq
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Thanks a lot Patrick for your motivating comment! I’m glad you liked the post 🙂
Thank you! I appreciate your thoughtful response.
Such an awesome way of replying someone. Thanks. Again
As always your posts are incredible and I enjoying reading every word down till the last line. I must say that you are probably one of the excellent bloggers on WordPress that write inspired
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